It has nicest flow, connection and i think it simply the best...the touch of your hand make water turn ice and candle to burn..sweet deep in poetry_Unwritten SOul
Such beauty in the lines...
Insightful, a nicely put together piece of loveliness. Fantastic! I often wonder the same! Enjoyed every lines. a very beautiful poem, filled with longing...This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.© Poems are the property of their respective owners. Loved it! Within a short range of vocabulary, you have written a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing. Do you dream of me As I dream of you Do you dream of us As I dream of us, too Do you hold me close As I sleep each night Do you watch me sleep As I hold you tight Do you miss me when you wake As we go through our day Do you wish to dream again As I wish our dreams would stay Do you see me smile As I walk at your side Do you hear my breath .....you bet your bippy I do, fondly Jerry
A really beautiful poem, with a beautiful flow to it. Pearl watches Steven sleep at night because maybe Rose is in there somewhere too. Wonderful poem! A song with vocals and piano I wrote inspired by Pearl's point of view. Awww that is such a lovely and beautiful poem filled with longing and hope! Very nice poem, with lots of feelings.